I like the idea with the guy. I think you could have afforded a bit brighter of rim light though, because of the pose and length of his arms. And the colors all mesh a bit, but overall I like it. The girl looks a little dullish in color, but I like the shadow of her pom poms a lot.
+ nice rim light on the guy
ReplyDelete- too much of a shadow on the girl
1.love the prop and the way you set it up.
ReplyDelete2. i really like the shadow behind her, but the picture seems a little dark and some shadow blocks out her face.
The light is really nice in the first shot. Very smooth.
ReplyDeleteI think in the cheerleader shot there is too much shadow coming awkwardly from her pom pom.
I like the pose and the feel of the top photo.
ReplyDeleteMaybe play with brightening the brights or darkening the darks a little.
The cheerleader has a really cute pose.
There is a lot of shadow on her face though.
I really like the first shot--great rim light.
ReplyDeleteI wish the second photo was brighter, but I think the pose is cute.
Very pose on the first photo, and great light, tones his face well.
ReplyDeleteThe second photo might have worked much better if the flash were pointed more at her face than her stomach.
I like the way the first one is cropped and how it tells a story.
ReplyDeleteThe cheerleader looks like the flash might of been too bright
I like the idea with the guy. I think you could have afforded a bit brighter of rim light though, because of the pose and length of his arms. And the colors all mesh a bit, but overall I like it.
ReplyDeleteThe girl looks a little dullish in color, but I like the shadow of her pom poms a lot.